Just a very short rant.. reason kung bakit wala akong lakas na magsulat... just want to vent my irritation...
Im frustrated and disappointed.. this is the first time I read a novel that I already reach Chapter 80+ but the relationship between the two main character didn't advance a little bit, not even mutual feelings to get my nerves feel alive... Or even the other party have a crush on him/her..
Of course, I'm just a novice and amateur writer and still trying to write a good story. I also don't have the right to criticize the author.
But………
as a writer, we intend to hook our readers to love and support our story. Satisfy them and imprint their obsession in our story. We have to meet their standard and don't want to drop the story halfway through and read it till the end.
And as a reader, we hope to read and see how the story goes on. We want that the story went smoothly like we wish to be and see how the main leads fall from each other. And eventually have a happy ending. HE.. lahat ng readers gustong mabasa ang kilig/sweet moments. More skinship and lovey dovey...
At first, I was so hooked and excited, also anticipated how both of them end up together. The plot is good and very interesting, that's why I started reading it, but… dammit!!!
Seriously!! I never imagined that such a novel exist. The novel is about to end but their relationship stayed still at 0%, not even level up at 1%. Para lang silang mag best friend na palaging nababonding.. nasaan na yung tags na *romance, etceteras*
😭😭 I just wasted my time reading it and only gave me a headache...
Buseet!!!! 👿👿
BINABASA MO ANG
friendship series-2nd generation Under The Sheets (ON HOLD)
General FictionWarning:: contains explicit materials, sexual, vulgarity that is not suitable for minors. Read at your own risk.. A/N: sorry po sa mga typos wrong grammar at flaws ng story ko, tumatanggap ako ng criticize o correction or ipaalala na may nakalimutan...
