Poetry - Maribat

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This is basically a you decide. I'm writing different verses and I'm interested in seeing what you guys think. On each verse I need you to comment or think about what the top is. There will be hints so feel free to share your ideas!

Her eyes were blue, as blue as the sea,

He hair was black, as black as can be,

A shade of dark and unearthly coal,

Matching the colour of her rings vicious soul.

Who matches the description in the first two lines? What sort of ring could have a 'vicious' soul? 

What is this verse about?

From blue to green and back again

Like the colours being switched on a four-sided pen.

Cheater, cheater, he cheated.

In the end he was defeated.

I tried to make this one hard. What goes from Blue to green that you know in Maribat? Who cheated and who ended up being defeated?

What is this verse about?


I look excited to hearing your results! It's one am where I am because I spend a lot of nights up doing random shit.

Hope you don't mind the swearwords, I felt extremely 'shy' when using them in my other book, 'Out late.'

The African beating I would get if my mum knew-

And if she knew I was up at this time?!?!

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