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×. ❜Bliss and Misery [Rev. Kaju]

Book Name: Bliss and Misery | Poetry

Author: Loonazure

Reviewer: Kaju  human_whatever

Cover: 1.5/05
The cover seems nice, well there isn't much either we can put for a poetry cover, but it seems a little basic, aesthetic images could be used instead of a sketch to make it more interesting. The images can be themed to most of the poetry of the book or any aesthetic you would like. 

Title: 4/5
The title is amazing. Relating to the book and unique at the same time, it does really attract the readers. 

Synopsis: 5/10
The synopsis is fine, but the small quote you put there, does really attract the reader. What you could've done is: put that in quotation marks and wrote something about what these are poems about. Something like, "These poems are the result of some deep feelings inside my heart. These are the result of things I am and would never be able to say in real life." Probably more than that, but that was just an example.

Structure and Performance: 19.5/20
The structure and performance was pretty impressive. The structures explained the whole poem and the story and the mood without any punctuations. The performance was amazing, the themes didn't go out of hand nor did the messages.

Message: 9.5/10
I like how you explained why that message was there and why that story was there, it gives a little more depth and the story. The messages are really nice. Most poems grip the readers more because they're relatable. And you worked amazing in those relatable messages.

Rhythm: 9.5/10
The rhyme schemes, song scales, syllables everything is amazing, they don't look forced or anything. They suit the book really well.

Grammar and Vocabulary: 19/20
I am going to point out the mistakes by using the poetry name and stanza, not chapter no.

Cold: 

Stanza 2: Last line it is supposed to be 'Cause or because and not cause. Cause means the literal reason, well, because means quite literally the same but it's for the reason and not directly the reason.

I know:

Stanza 3: Fourth line, same mistake as before.

Vocabulary was nice, it gripped the readers, but using some older English words that are not used in vocabulary anymore, but it didn't feel like it was lacking so no issues.

Creativity and Understanding: 19/20
The poems were really creative, and understanding them was pretty easy, nothing complex a reader has problems reading. It really relates to the readers that way.

Total: 87/100

Final note:
The collection is amazing, i seriously loved all of them, and kind of related to some lol. But I would suggest you add more punctuations like question marks, exclamation marks, periods and probably dashes and commas. It adds a better dramatic effect. It also attracts the readers more. (This is optional)