Cover: 2/05 The cover is okay, I'd say. It looks like a beginner's, and looks choppy, which is a kind of impression that we don't want to have on our readers. The cover's quality is almost always compared with the book's quality. The colours don't blend well either.
Title: 4.5/05 It's great. I do like the thought of it though. But it looks interesting and has context to the book! Great work on that!
Synopsis: 9/10
The synopsis is pretty much amazing! Perfect scene makes people want to read more and more for when that scene comes and it is well written.
The second is also great, but i think it could've been worded and paragraphed a little different. :)
Execution: 9/10 The execution is good, but it could've been a lil better. Not like it was lacking anywhere but, you could've added some longer scenes! It looks really great tho! And tbh, it feels a little extended sometimes, but it does the job!
Plot: 18/20 The plot is great! But it gets a little confusing because of the long and too many scenes. The complexity is really great tho! I also like the plot summary! It is something a person would actually like to read! Great job! :)
Writing Style: 18/20 The writing style is amazing, perfect description and perfect timing. I don't know what else to say about it as it's so good. In chapter 25, the way you describe the tension between Soph and Alywin, it feels like that tension is upon me. Which is a great way to connect to your readers!
Grammar & Vocabulary: 19/20 The grammar is amazing! I would say even the one or two mistakes I noticed are mostly typos. (Which i have mentioned in the comments)
And the vocabulary is really great too! I think it does not lack anywhere and does in fact show what it is supposed to! Great job author-nim!
Characters & Development: 7/10 Even though the characters are not given wholeass personality paragraphs, they are pretty much known. We all know what Soph would behave or how Alywin would in certain situations. But I think a little more explanation is needed (optional). And I also think a little more gradual development would work.
Total: 86.5/100
Final Note: Hey! I've only reviewed 10 chapters for now, as I told you before also. I loved the book and i wish I could read it but I'm too busy to even open wp lol XD <3
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