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×. ❜Bet? [Rev. Lia]

Story Review: "Bet?"
Author: by ryuluvbts
Reviewer: Lia [ homiekook ]

Cover: 4/5

The cover is pretty nice and very effectively captures the overall theme of the story but it could be made more unique for it to stand out among other stories with a similar theme.

Title: 4/5

The title "Bet?" fills the readers with a sense of curiosity. It is easy to remember and catchy, but doesn't put across the depth of the plot.

Synopsis: 8/10

The synopsis is written very well and gives the readers a pretty good sense of what to expect from the story without giving away h

the important aspects.Though it could be changed a little bit to create a stronger bluff, it definitely does a great job at introducing the setting for the story.

Execution: 8/10

The story is well executed. There's a nice balance between all the elements of the story like the romance, tension and drama.There are just a few parts where the writing feels a little rushed.

Plot: 16/20

Despite this being a popular plot idea, the writer has done a great job of keeping the uniqueness of this story so that the readers would find it intriguing. It had plenty of plot twists to keep the readers intrigued. The only problem with a popular plot idea is that some areas of the story become a little predictable, but the writer still manages to keep the reader’s attention. Adding a little more complexity to certain parts could make it a lot less predictable.

Writing Style: 16/20

As a story written on Wattpad, the writing style is perfect. It is written in a simple language and is easy to read. There were just a few moments where it felt like the writer could elaborate, especially the emotions. That way it would have given the readers a more visual idea about the whole story.

Grammar and Vocabulary: 17/20

The grammar and vocabulary had little to no mistakes. Nothing too distracting. There is definitely room for improvement when it comes to the use of a more sophisticated set of words but like I mentioned in the writing style, it's perfect for a platform like Wattpad.

Characters and Development: 7/10

The characters were nicely presented, but it lacked a lot of backstories and there was more potential when it came to the growth of some of the characters, especially the side characters.

Overall Score: 80/100

"Bet?" by ryuluvbts is an engaging and fun read, particularly for fans of romance and drama. With just a little changes in the descriptions and characters, the whole story could become even better.