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×. ❜Ocultar

Book - Ocultar
Author- bangtanrewinds
Reviewer- Lia [ homiekook ]

Cover: 4/5 

The mysterious and dark tones of the story reflects on the cover very well. It is also very visually appealing.

Title: 5/5

The title "Ocultar" is short, memorable and intriguing. It perfectly captures the dark theme of the story.

Synopsis: 8/10 

The synopsis gives a good sense of the story’s setting, hinting at the suspense and drama. It effectively draws in readers but if it offered a bit more clarity on the main conflict it would hook more readers.

Execution: 8/10

The execution is strong with well-written plot twists to keep the readers engaged. Except a few slow moments, the pace of the story is perfect.

Plot: 18/20 

The plot is compelling, with a good balance of mystery, romance, and drama. It also has moments where the readers keep guessing. Only a few areas were a little predictable.

Writing Style: 17/20 

The writing style is so descriptive that I can almost see it happening. The dialogue is also very natural.

Grammar and Vocabulary: 18/20

Except a few minor errors, the grammar is mostly clean. A varied vocabulary has been used that improves the overall writing quality. The words used fits the tone of the story really well.

Characters and Development: 8/10 

The characters have proper goals with a lot of growth throughout the story. The protagonist is especially well-written but the side characters could use a little more work and complexity. Giving them more back story and solid motives could help.

Overall Score: 86/100