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×. ❜Little Darklings [Rev. Akime]

>> Book Name: Little Darklings: Third Time's A Charm

>> Author:  royallyethereal

>> Reviewer: Akime ( -JcalicocatJ- )

Cover: 03/05
The cover is beautiful. The fonts, the background, and the placement of everything are very elegant, all over it looks very nice. Except for the part where 'JOJO' is written, should've used a different font. As I read the story I could relate less and less to the cover, however, I liked the first cover in the very first chapter of the book.

Title: 02/05
'Little Darkling' was enough and relatable with the story but I don't think there was any need to include 'Third Time's A Charm'. The title is long which makes it unimpressive. The first part also suits the story.

Synopsis: 06/10
I admire how the description was detailed,  and how it was in its flow but it was too long. Maybe making it short would attract more attention to the context of the book than giving an overall idea already. And the character was introduced in the end when the story is forced on her, maybe introduce her in the middle or try blending her circumstances in the middle.

Execution: 06/10
All over, it is not quite impressive. When we talk about one thing it plays okay but everything with each other doesn't go with the same flow to me.

Plot: 20/20
Honestly, the plot was the best part of all of the above, it was executed perfectly. It is unique too, to read on Wattpad. It is something that would be the most unrealistic thing but again it all makes sense at the same time. Also, it was explained appropriately and properly. It gives no plot hole, created very carefully.

Writing Style: 19/20
Everything was well explained which let the reader create the image vividly. The story was focused on the plot. The paragraphs were neither too long nor too short. The characters' emotions and the reason behind their words and actions are not clear but it is a rare case. It is all about the chapter.

Grammar & Vocabulary: 19/20
Grammar and Vocabulary were on point, there were only minor mistakes, to be honest. Which can be detected by reviewing it again.

Characters & Development: 7/10
The main character Maeve was well explained, but the other characters were a little out of focus but enough to give the impression of their personality, and they were carried out properly too. Sometimes the emotions of the characters are not vivid but sometimes they are, in my opinion. It will be quite impressive if it will be the same every time.

# Total: 82/100

Final Note: My all-over impression is that the story plot is carried out very well. It would be very satisfying if you could make some changes to the story based on the flow of it without touching the plot a bit.