ꗃ﹕❜ Minerva ❯❯ A review shop [2.0]

×. ❜Revenge [Rev. Cey]

Book Name: Revenge [BTS J.JK FF]

Author:  heartbeatsseven

Reviewer: Cey ( ceyshells )

Cover: 2/05

Very simply designed, with the main characters represented, title present, quote. Colour used is appropriate. One issue that I have is that the cover designer's username is on the cover. Normally, a credit in the bio is good enough. Furthermore, the second name on the cover takes the attention away from the name at the top, which is actually the author's name.

Title: 1/05

Before change: Extremely common title. Might attract reader's attention as it is a tried and true concept but other than that, it blends in with other books and doesn't stand out much.

After change: The author changed the title of their book without informing the community. It is a lot more detailed and not as commonly found, but due to the lack of communication, I'm forced to deduct some marks from this component.

Synopsis: 3/10

The purpose of a synopsis is to attract the reader's attention, but most importantly, it should give a rough glimpse of the story without adding too many details. Though the blurb itself is good, there are some grammatical errors, punctuational mistakes, and the overall look of the description is a little long, making it look slightly off.

I can provide you with a revised blurb as an example:

"Why are you doing this?"

"You don't know?"

"Remember I'm not only doing this to take my revenge, I'm also claiming what is mine."

TW: blood, murder, abuse, cringy romance

°Detailed Chapters
°A lot of grammatical errors
°Slow updates
°Do not copy my work! Plagiarism will not be tolerated.

Cover credits: @Reeruworld00