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×. ❜Rise of the night witch [ Rev. Blazé]

Book Name: Rise of the Night Witch

Author:  PASharp

Reviewer: Blazé ( -taeyze- )

Cover: 2/5
It isn't very enticing and seems rather boring. Everything needs a redo.

Title: 4.5/5
The title goes with the story and suits it nicely, needless to say.

Synopsis: 8/10
The content is good but the presentation is a bit bland. Also, the info could be included in the intro instead of the blurb.

Execution: 9.5/10
No faults. It's very nicely penned down, and it's very enticing to read. Though at the start, it is a little boring, it soon takes up a good turn.

Plot: 19/20
It's not very common and that's the strength. It's pretty interesting and the way it is written makes it even better. There aren't any plotholes either, good job!

Writing Style: 19.5/20
I really liked it. It was very beautifully written. The content was precise; at times descriptive, and at times crisp, according to the situations. It's quite appreciatable. The paragraph changes are well done too. Nothing really wrong with your writing style, it's good to go!

Grammar & Vocabulary: 19/20
There is a good use of vocabulary and literary devices. It didn't feel repetitive either. There are some minor grammatical errors and punctuation errors, but that didn't destroy the mood at all. It can be fixed with a proofread. And there shouldn't be space before the ellipse.

Characters & Development: 9/10
I liked how you put the characters with significance and especially Siris. For a fantasy book, it's really hard to actually provide significance to the characters even though just cameos, but you pulled it off just great. The development was also good, and the pace was pretty good.

Total: 90.5/100

Final note: The first few chapters are a little faulty and make it boring but later it's fine. Also, the length of the chapters is a bit long. It'd be better if you could shorten it. And the recap at the start of chapters kinda breaks the flow, that's my personal opinion though. Otherwise, it's a very amazing book! I loved it!