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×. ❜My Dear Moon [Rev. Cia]

Title - My Dear Moon

Username -  _Navier_170

Reviewer - hooWoman (Cia)

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COVER: 2.5 / 5

At the first glimpse, the cover looked okay but when I focused on it a bit I felt the cover needed some major changes. The background picture does look good but the rest of everything is messed up.

The title has messily covered half of the book. Try to write the title in the centre and in just one line or two, not more than that or else the title looks huge and unattractive.

Change the font style of the title, please.

Coming to the author's name on the top, I feel it's too tiny, it would have looked much better if you wrote it below the title instead of above.

TITLE:  4.5 / 5

It matches perfectly with the cover and the blurb but it could have been more unique.

*Comes back after reading the book and changes the score from 3 to 4.5*
-The title suits the story well. It's perfect. I loved the hidden meaning behind the title.

SYNOPSIS-  5  / 10

As it's a short story of one chapter we will consider the blurb as the synopsis.

I just continued further after reading the blurb because I had to review the book or else being a reader I wouldn't have. The blurb is a bit boring, you should try to give a better summary of the story. Make it a bit interesting so that the reason becomes curious.

EXECUTION: 9/10

Perfect.

When the author writes these kinds of stories it's very rare but very important that the writer makes the reader feel the pain and the situation that the character is going through and I think you aced it. I read a book like this on WP after a long time.

PLOT-  19/20

I was completely lost in the book at first, I for one second became a reader instead of a reviewer, to be honest.

We all have a person in our life who used to play a very important role but somehow they aren't a part of our life anymore. Which is sad and heartbreaking.

The story tells the reality of life, where we all won't always have a happy ending.

•      WRITING STYLE -  19 /20

This is one of the unique writing styles I have seen on WP, it's beautiful in its way, making the reader get into the story and feel the character.

The book just had one chapter as it's a short story but you haven't missed any details of the protagonists. You didn't just focus on the breakup part but summarised everything in just a few words which makes this story one of the best.

•      GRAMMAR AND VOCAB -  18/20

I didn't find many grammatical mistakes. The story seems to be well polished and presentable.

The book is an easy read, but highly complicated words weren't used to make the reader hit their head on the wall, which is quite impressive.

Simple and good!

•  CHARACTERS & DEVELOPMENT: 8/10

Characters, you haven't specified even the gender which makes the story unique and as I mentioned before, in just less than 2000 words you have nicely explained the characters. I'm going to add this book to my reading list for sure and hope you come up with such amazing short stories more often.

Hope this review helped you, you are free to PM if you find any mistakes in the review or need some help.

Good luck.

Total: 85/100