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×. ❜Autumn Finch [Rev. Akime]

Book Name: Autumn Finch

Author: Snowheart19__3

Reviewer: -JcalicocatJ-

Cover: 03/05
The cover's aesthetic matches the book and the character aesthetic which is nice and the book is based on a love story. It matches the whole theme too. But the sticker on it neither looks cool nor do I think it's necessary if you still want to keep it. I suggest moving it near the title and decreasing its size. And last thing the 'Exclusive on Wattpad' sign, I think it would be better if it was in the middle on top or bottom.

Title: 04/05
I misunderstood the concept of the title at first. I thought it would be something related to Autumn but it was clear as soon as I read the blurb, maybe a little disappointed too. A book with the lead character's name doesn't determine how it's going to be but it determines the strength of the writer's creativity. I wouldn't say it doesn't suit the book but I guess it doesn't suit the story. If you are willing to change it try to make it more related to the situation of the whole story or something more romantic so that it can attract the audience.

Synopsis: 06/10
I do not find any grammatical mistakes in it but it lacks ministration. The blurb gives us the whole idea doesn't it except for the part about the male characters' past but it isn't enough. We need our minds to work when it thinks we get curious to know about our assumptions. Maybe you need to rewrite it and keep most of the part of the plot concealed or protected for the audience. After all, it's not fun to read situations only but it's fun to predict the situations. And Nah I don't want to see its achievements first I want to see what it has for me. The part about your achievements should be put down after the blurb of the story.

Execution: 8/10
I am most impressed by how the plot is carried out so far and the characters. But I do have a complaint that the chapters are small which is not so impressive. As soon as I am getting all the feels right and I am just getting lost with the winter's style the chapter ends.

Plot: 15/20
As far as I have read it only loves interest developing between the main characters and some past incidents, which I can say is well placed. Like the writer knows when to give readers a glimpse of the past and when not to maintain the reader's interest. And the idea of the plot I got from the blurb is pretty common, 'A character ready to do anything for love.' But yeah I am impressed by the setting of the plot so far. They are not rushed but yet they are not inactive.

Writing Style: 19/20
I don't have much to say about this, I don't think the writer lacks experience, they know perfectly where to put the right emotion. I like how the writer describes just every feeling about the characters very delicately and in a lovely way. That it doesn't look rushed but it is just valid. Yet not the best I have seen, just a little improvement which sure can be improved with time.

Grammar & Vocabulary: 16/20
It's 16 because I find some grammatical mistakes, just minor ones. But the use of fonts is messy in one sense, you may say Italic fonts are used for thoughts, but in the story, there are some points where it looks like it's a character's thought but they are not in italic, yeah italic isn't used for thought all the time but for important things that we want to draw someone's attention to. Also, in chapter 2 the writer mentions place and time but in the first chapter? Nope. In some places, the time or place name isn't underlined like it is in chapter 2. It will be super better for readers if this could be fixed. And vocabulary isn't bad according to the romance genre but it would be better to use more words that add a heavy feeling to words. The last part can be ignored because yeah it's just the starting and maybe it would be too much to add heavy feeling tho but keep that in mind.

Characters & Development: 10/10
The character's design is remarkably good. Not only do one or two characters have a personality but every character does, I am talking about the side characters. Which is great. Actions that give the character a personality are added to every character from Matt to Autmn's grandmother. 

Total: 81/100

Final Note: The book is good for romance genre things. Your writing style will improve as you continue to write and I am saying this because I can see how good you already are.