Teasers from the narrative essay about an important event in my life I'm writing for English. We just found out about it today and while most haven't started I'm already finished (oops)
My hook:
Every since I was little everyone praised my older sister, Tori. She was smarter than me, and had a passion: dance. When my little sister, Lisa, was born she became protected, fragile and treated like a princess because her problems. Growing up around my two sisters who had their passions it was hard for me to catch my parents' eyes if I wasn't making some stupid joke or breaking my pinky doing a cartwheel. I didn't know what I wanted in life while my sisters were all set and ready to go. While I was still picking out my breakfast, Tori and Lisa already had their dinner set out.
What do you think?
Little excerpt:
The next day before even starting the next chapter, I checked my rank. Short story #119.
A loud, high pitch shriek sounded around the house and Lisa ran in to make sure I wasn't being murdered. "Are you okay?" She asked, frowning. No words escaped my mouth, only gurgling noises and loud exhales of breath. I pointed to the screen, with wide eyes and started to make sounds similar to cat when someone steps on it's tail. Lisa rolled her eyes and walked away.
What do you think?
Something else:
I went into this deep, small cave that only had darkness and spiders. In this cave the mind was only scattered thoughts and images, and nothing coherent existed. The most awful torture an author can suffer; Writers block.
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Ending:
I finally let go and decided to continue with my new found passion, one I had spent years trying to find; writing.
What do you think?
YOU ARE READING
My Memory Log
Non-FictionIn which my memories will not be forgotten. All these are actual stories I remember. All of these are true and happened.
