i went from 40 comments a chapter to 1 is my writing going that bad?
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i stared at the man in front of me, pulling the comforter to hide my exposed chest with a smile on my lips. "i take it you're enjoying your stay?"
i nodded sheepishly and ashton walked over to me and laid down. i moved so i was straddling his hips, pressing a kiss to his chest before getting more comfortable. "where's michael?"
"by his self most likely, do you want me to tell him to come to you? i wanted to take april down to the pool anyways." he started to shift under me and i let him. i watched as he got and grabbed his phone from the table, sending a text to michael before kissing my forehead. "he'll be here in a few."
i waited patiently, passing the time on my phone before the door open and i opened my arms for michael to climb in to. he chuckled but did as told as i embraced him. "i've missed you."
"it's only been a day since we got here." he rolled his eyes and i shrugged. "you should really get out though, the water is beautiful and tomorrow we were going to take a trip to this place where monkey's just roam." he grinned and i smiled. "so there's going to be a bunch of you there?"
before he could slap me i put my hands up in defense and started to get out of bed. "alright i'm getting out is everyone at the pool or just ashton and april?"
"everyone is down there, we've pretty much been waiting for you." he stayed put on the bed while i brushed my teeth and changed.
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"i will destroy you." i gritted my teeth, grabbing luke's foot and tugging him into the water. he screeched before his body hit the water. "don't push me next time!"
"you weren't walking fast enough!" he protested and i glared at him before a weight was on my back. i glanced down at the small hands on my shoulder tilted my head back. april gripped at my cheeks. "onward!"
i started to swim forward towards the edge of the pool before turning around and diving under. april gripped onto my shoulders tighter, tapping lightly when she needed to go back up to breathe. "can i surf on you?"
i panted, gripping onto the wall in front of me. "ashton is much stronger than daddy i would go try him."
april dismounted me and swam over to ashton was talking with harry and louis. charlie and adrian where nowhere to be seen until i spotted the two towards the stairs talking. "daddy look!"
my head turned and i smiled, holding two thumbs up as ashton swam underwater and april stood on his back. she struggled to keep her balance before she fell and i swam over to her. "look who's not so punk rock."
"i am too! you try and do better than me." she scoffed and ashton and i shared a glance. we walked over to the edge of the pool and i sat down, ashton counting down from three before going under water. i planted my feet firmly on his back, even myself out as he started to swim forehead.
april watched with wide eyes and i stuck my tongue out at her before ashton came back up and i fell off. "louis let me do that with you!"
i watched as harry pounced on the older man, the two starting to go out it before april shouted. "grow the fuck up!"
people's heads turned and i sunk under the water, staying at the bottom before a tap was on my shoulder. i opened my eyes, ashton pressing his lips to mine and i cupped both his cheeks smiling before pulling away. i went back above the surface, seeing april standing on the edge of the pool with her hand on her hips.
"don't you go fighting this vacation does not tolerate violence."
"april-"
"shush." she flipped her hair over her shoulder and walked off. i smirked, raising my finger in the air and moving it back and forth. "don't mess with princess."
"i may have to look out for her but don't mess with your daddy calum, you might get punished." harry fired back and i spoke before ashton could. "at least i got something to call a daddy. what do you got a noodle?"
"a very big one!" louis cut in and i rolled my eyes.
"daddy what's a noodle? is it like the pasta noodles you make?" april tugged on my arm and my cheeks flushed. "ask uncle mike, or luke, yeah luke, luke knows what a noodle is." i waved her off and she grinned before going over to luke. they talked for a bit and his cheeks flushed as he looked over at me. "calum i may be a teather but this is not what i teach!"
"it should be." michael swam up next to me and sighed. "how are you holding up?"
"the best that i can." i shrugged, glancing at his glowing red skin. "come on, we're putting a fourth coat on you."
michael pouted but followed me out of the water and to the table we put our stuff at. i grabbed the sunscreen and squirted some onto my hand before massaging into his back. "arms out." i grabbed the spray and made sure i got every inch of his body before doing to the same to his other side. "face?"
"let me burn to death." he mumbled,taking off his glasses. he had a tan around his eyes and i laughed before getting the face cream and letting him apply it. luke walked over with a grin on his face. "aw is my baby on fire?"
"shut up."
"you look like a tomato."
"i was thinking more blood orange, salmon?"
"shut up!" michael stomped his feet a little and luke and i laughed. "you know i still love you, even if you are a bit rosey red."
"luke?"
"yes baby?"
"i hope you choke on my dick tonight." michael pressed a kiss to his cheek before walking off and i raised an eyebrow. "go on luke, choke." i made a hand motion, before gagging a little.
"you've got no room to talk hood-irwin, i hope you won't be able to sit for next three weeks." luke sat down, making wincing noises. "oh daddy, you went so rough last night. i'll be a good boy this time."
"as if! oh michael, faster! faster!" i closed my eyes and faked a moan. "your man be trying to find that spot upside down."
"your man can't even make you moan you gotta fake em for him."
"you come with a dial and he still can't turn you on!"
"i think we have a bet then." luke shook his head. "who has the best sex."
"deal."
