Loved You First

Heat

Loved You First (Part 28)

Louis and I rushed to the house it was up in flames the smell of tar and smoke filled my nostrils, making me cough. The whole house was on fire Louis broke away from me to run to his family nearby. They looked so distressed and his mum was a wreck sobbing and falling to her knees. "LOTTIE DAISY PHOEBE!!!" she cried then it dawned on me they were still I'm the house. Louis pushed against the firefighters desperately trying to pry the doors open. They got away in the nick of time before a flaming wooden board which would've been the porch collapsed. Louis pushed against the firefighters begging them to let him in to save his sisters. Them something happened that I didn't plan. My legs stiffened I held my breath and ran towards the window barely missing a police officer trying to stop me. Shrieks of Pleading with me to get out of there. But my senses were working over time I started to cough sweat dripping down my neck. "LOTTIE?!?! *Cough Cough* DAISY PHOBE!!!" I managed with all the smoke around me I was afraid I might choke. The heat was intense sparks touching my pale skin, sizzling the tips on my hair. I called for them again and this time I heard a scream. "LOTTIE? LOTTIE WHERE ARE YOU?" I hacked uncontrolaubally my eyes teared up I was now drenched in sweat. "ASHLEY ASHLEY IM HERE PLEASE COME GET ME!!!!! DAISY IS HERE WITH ME ASHLEY!!!" I heard Phoebe's cry for help. "Phoebe I'm here don't move." I saw her she was covered in ash and Daisy was passed out next to her. I scoped up Daisy holding her bridal style. "Phoebe stay behind me at all times! Got that?!" she nodded. Thank god Daisy was light then I found the window I had burst through. "Phoebe get thought the window NOW GO!" she climbed out coughing a firefighter came to get her another took Daisy out of my arms. "LOTTIE LOTTIE WHERE ARE YOU PLEASE ANSWER ME!!!" although I screamed my loudest the sound of fire crackling was too loud. My throat burned my lungs felt like they could take no more. I was thirsty and weak. Finally I herd a faint "Help..." my ears perked up "LOTTIE!"

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(Ashley's POV)

I ran towards the direction towards her. And there she was covered with ash and her eyes were bloodshot. "LOTTIE IM COMING!" I yell she just lyes there lifelessly am so focused on getting to her that I don't realize a burning sensation on my leg. I hear the sizzle of my flesh being burned. A wooden board has been burning my leg. I drag Lottie out of the way before a wooden board claps where Lottie was currently. I picked her up like a baby she was so weak and barely breathing "Lottie stay with me stay with me Lottie everything is going to be ok. Lottie stay awake for me and for your mum your dad your sisters, Louis." that perked her up because she started coughing up ashes. She was a bit heavier then the twins. As I ran for the exit a flaming board fell and badly burned my arm I nearly dropped Lottie "Lottie I need you to stand can you stand?" she gives a weak nod as if to say 'I don't know but I'll try.' I slowly put her down more smoke fills the room She stands but her knees buckle under her. "Crawl Lottie crawl." she follows my directions. The board still blocks our way my eye catches an umbrella it's long it's not much but it may save our lives. I place the umbrella like a crow bar between the door and the board it falls out of place but the umbrella catches on fire. I quickly discard it. Lottie is now passed out slowly breathing like every single breath she took in made her suffer more. I picked her up and rushed out of the house the window was still free of fire but there was flames every where. I placed Lottie in a firefighters arms and tried to get out myself I fell out my body wouldn't hold up for me. Louis caught me and held me tight. Out of the corner of my eye I saw a smoldering cigarette in the dry weeds. All I remembered was the extreme heat that I endured before I passed out.

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Yes finally got the fire scene. Well please comment and vote is you please. And if you are reading my other book Half Blood Hunger Games I did update but for some reason I wattpad won't let me post it. So I'll be trying.