Alright I just finished reading the first two chapters.:)
Things I didn't like:
*The dialogue was a bit confusing. You would switch back and forth between past and present tenses. I do this to a lot in my books. When you say some things in this is sounds like your reading from a text book. This is just my opinon...
*Nothing else really wrong with it. Now we are getting to the good stuff!:D
Things I do like:
*It's about something that could happen. A sickness! Non-fiction I love it! I'm weird sorry...
*I like how the girl didn't meet a guy and fall in love with in thrity seconds. >.<
*I voted!:) Overall 3/5 stars.
Sorry its not very long I just really like the book so, I can't find anything wrong.:) Added to my library!
