Things I didn't like:
*You had a few grammer mistakes I would suggest you find yourself a editor.:)
*You need more detail.xC
Things I did like:
*The cover it's so pretty!:D
*Your plot. It reminded me of my best friend but, I call her my sister.;O
Overall, I give your book a 2/5 sorry it's so low. You can change it though by fixing your mistakes.:)
