Things I didn't like:
*Some of your punctuation is missing...>.>
Things I did like:
*Aria's sarcasam! I laughed way to hard.xD
*Ryker and his cute little character!
*Your cover. I love rhe guitar and the clock. Fits the book perfectly.
*Cliff hanger! *gasp*
Overall, it would be a 3/5 because, of the missing punctuation. Though, since I really enjoyed the plot and detail, I'm giving you 4/5 stars. Always room for improvement though!:)
