Things I didn't like:
*Your summary is extremely long and it kind of just made a big jumble of words. Maybe you could have someone read through it and cut some stuff out. A summaray shouldn't be as long as the first chapter. You are just giving the readers a small taste of your book.
*Your ending paragraph didn't make me want to read more of your book it was just kind of...average. Try adding in some action there.
Things I did like:
*Your cover. It' invites you in the story.
Overall, I give this book a 2/5 it's not great though, it's not amazing either try adding some more twists and turns.
Happy writing!:)
