I really like this story so, sorry if there isn't much negative things on it.
Things I didn't like:
*Your prologue seemed a bit off from the rest of the story. I'm not sure how to explain this, but, it's not a major mistake so, I wouldn't worry to much about it.:)
Things I did like:
*I love how the aliens are the good guys and the humans are the "dangerous" It makes you think!
*The way you described when the character "Lori" started getting scared about how the humans would take her.
*You have no spelling or punctuation errors.
Overall, I give this a 5/5 stars. Great job!:D
