Things I didn't like:
* Your summary. It's short and doesn't give you a short...lets call it a window.. a window to the beginning of the story. Your summary should give you just a tiny bit of insight to your book or readers won't want to read more. I would think about adding the quote to the beginning of the summary then going into what your book is about.
* Your cover. It makes your character "Nattie" seem bad or dark. Maybe you could do her point of view and show a bit of the future? I mean if the girl on the cover is Nattie and she's smoking she might be going through some tough times at the moment and you could shed a bit of light on that.
*You need more detail adding some fill to these chapters can really help.
Things I did like:
* The general "Wolf" idea. It's a nice story plot and gives some room to make quite a few twists and turns in the story.
Overall, I give this book a 2/5. It has potential you just need to work on it.:)
