Things I didn't like:
*You have a few puntuation errors nothing major just a few. Spell check will help that.;)
Things I did like:
*Your plot line is absolutely amazing! The idea of being a clone! Wow, I applaud you lady. *claps*
*Your detail is beautifuly written and has a wonderful pace throughout the entire story.
Overall, I give you 5/5 wonderful job! I voted!:D
