Things I didn't like:
*Every work in your title should be capitalized.
Things I did like:
*You have a really nice Prologue. It makes me want to read more and the way you described "Uncle Jonas's" personality was really great.
*Your story has a good flow to it. Really it does.
*I love the way you included music into her personality. Even the song she put on in her headphones, makes her character more and more intriguing.
There is nothing else to critique on really. It's a good Prologue, can't wait until the next chapter.
4/5 stars just fix your title.:)
