I don't generally read poetry so, sorry if I don't know much about it.
Things I didn't like:
*There was nothing I didn't like really, because, well I just don't generally read poetry so, I don't have much to say...
Things I did like:
*Your cover. It gives you a small insight telling you this has something to do with writing. Short and simple.
*Your poems were very relatable. The first one with the mom was really moving. And I hugged my mom. ^-^
*They are also short and sweet. The second one was very beautiful.
Overall, I give you 4/5 stars. I wish I could give more. I just don't know much. Sorry.xC