Things I didn't like:
* Each time a new person talks you need to start a NEW paragraph.
* Your cover/ It's okay, but, it could be better.
Things I did like:
* Your book has a lot of action and drama in it. SUSPENCE SUSPENCE SUSPENCE. Holy cow trucks there is a lot of suspence! I like this it's just awesome.
Overall, I give you a 3/5. Normally I would give only a 2 star rating though, since you have a good plot I give you 3.:)
