Things I didn't like:
*It seems a bit like the original. I mean maybe you could add a few twists? I just feel like we are watching the movie again. Katniss has a best guy friend so does Ryan. Katniss volenteers for the place of someone she loves so does Ryan. There are just to many simularitires involved. I know it's the same book and all but, you need to have some creativity! Your a great writer and I would hate to have you feel about this. Just find something new for the characters.
Things I did like;
*Ryan her overall, character is smart, micheivous, and strong willed.
*Your detail is great.
Overall, I give you a 4/5 star rating. Just fix that one thing and it will bump your rating right up!:D
