Things I didn't like:
* Your cover. It's nice but, you could make it better by fading the character "Sophia" into the back round or something. You don't give us a great picture of this woman unless we google her face.
* You don't need to put all the lyrics in the book. Just a few lines, nobody actually reads the lyrics. (No offence)
Things I did like:
* When Danielle got in the car crash I just cried for like 10 minutes. You made me care about one of your characters. That's a good thing.:D
* I like how Liam realizes he needs to move on and doesn't just stay stuck in depression mode.
Overall, I give this a 3/5. You have good potential you just need to fix some stuff.:)
