Things I didn't like:
*Will there be any actual things happening in the story? Or, just letters? Either way it's a great idea. But, if there is going to be things happening you may want to put the letters in italic to sepperate the letters from things that actually happened.
Things I did like:
*Harry isn't some creeper just trying to get in her pants. He's almost like the corny, cute, fluffy teddy bear we all know.:D
*The story isn't major predictable. I really thought she was just sending a lettter to her friend. ^_^
Overall, I give this a 4/5 stars, There isn't anything else left to critique on so, thats pretty good for the first two chapters.:)
