Lance's Birthday! (15K Special)

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Guess what?!






We made another milestone again! And I decided, you know since it's Lance's Birthday, you know, why don't I write about him?

Well, at first it was hard to think about. Would I write Langst, or Fluff, or a small childhood story.

But than I realized something...

Okay, so as you know, almost the whole book is written in Pidge's perspective. In some points, you will see it in Shiro's perspective. And in rare points you will find it in someone else's.

And that's on purpose.

The book is slightly bias to Pidge's perspective. And that's on purpose. To feel what she feels. It's an writing style I like to take.

But at one point (Chapter Fifteen) of the book, I started to recieve these comments, and I understand why you would.

But at one point (Chapter Fifteen) of the book, I started to recieve these comments, and I understand why you would

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Okay, you get the point, everyone started hate Lance, but I think a lot of you were too quick to judge

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Okay, you get the point, everyone started hate Lance, but I think a lot of you were too quick to judge.

'Cause what would happen, if that section was slight bias in Lance's perspective. Maybe you'll have a different take on it.

So here we go! Chapter Fifteen Rewrite!

(Disclaimer: This is not and nor will ever be the official Chapter Fifteen. The official is the original one.)

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