My love burns within

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So... I decided to write one poem with rhymes, one poem without rhymes. Here is the one without rhymes. Hope you enjoy :)

I see the sea

When my tears form the waves

I gaze at stars

When they are my faint hopes in oblivion

I feel the breeze

When I taste drops of the nectar called freedom

I gaze at your face,

And then, my heart has a turbulence

Of unexplained feelings

And unknown, unexplored, unexpected emotions

A feeling of warmth

That emanates from deep within me

My love burns within

Reach out for my flames of undiluted passion

So... no rhymes. I almost feel guilty for not using rhymes. Is this good enough?

Also, is emanates the right word? I am pretty sure, but... pretty unsure too.

Still... hope you liked it :)

Btw this is a sonnet

Btw this is a sonnet

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