Abandoned

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The white snow, so simple

And so clear

A disguise

Laying thick over the solemn

City Street

I stand still

And listen

From the middle of the crosswalk

I hear

A distant horn

A call of frustration

From some abandoned car

At the bottom of some

Mischievous slope

The owner long gone

For a coffee no doubt

The wailing call continues

But grows ever the more faint

As the battery

Drains away

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A/N:

I've learned never to throw away a notebook or stack of papers without checking to see if there is a lost poem hiding within.  This is one of those saved poems, that was lost but now is found.

I added the word 'snow'.

And replaced the word 'getting' with the words 'laying thick'.

This is a special poem for me, something about the personification of the abandoned car, juxtaposed against an owner that has retreated to warmth and some fancy coffee creation.

Cheers,

-DarthPadre

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