First off let me apologize, this story was a hot mess 😂😂😂 I had a pretty solid plan going into the story, everything was planned out perfectly but I got distracted. What I didn't account for was someone defending the actions of one character in particular and by them defending that character I focused more on showing that she was a bad person instead of focusing on the story. In Part 2 I'm going to try to focus more on the MAIN characters and their stories but for right now I need a break because this story drained me. Listed below are some questions for y'all to answer on how I can improve things in Part 2, I'm not above criticism as long as it's respectful so don't hold back...................
1) Who were your Favorite Character(s)?
2) Who were Least Favorite Character(s)?
3) Which relationship do you wanna see advance in Part Two?
4) Who do y'all think was the strongest couple?
5) Who do y'all think needs more development?
6) Who were your favorite characters?
7) Who were your least favorite characters?
8) Who was the funniest character?
9) Who was the freakiest character?
10) What did you like about the story?
11) If you could pick two characters to have a threesome with who would you pick?
12) What didn't you like about the story?
13) What would you like to see happen in Act 2?
14) What can I do to make Part Two better?
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Exiled
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