Reviewer-hayxden
~P R O S~
⭐︎The storyline is very creative!
⭐︎The descriptions are amazing! Readers can easily visulize the scene as well as feel what Kiara feels
⭐︎The relationship between Sky and Kiara is well written
⭐︎The playlist at the beginning of each chapter is creative and a nice touch
⭐︎The only cons are with grammar which means your plot and storyline are well done
~C O N S~
The punctuation after the dialogue isn't there, so reading through and fixing those small mistakes would be beneficial
Skylar's name isn't capitalized and since it's a proper noun it should be. Even Sky as a nickname should be as well
There were a few missing commas
There were words that should be capitalized (Beginning of a sentence, dialogue, proper nouns)
Great job
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