PROS:
-Super Descriptive
-Very engaging (I was interested throughout the entire story)
-Gives off this teen coming of age/murderous vibe, and I absolutely LOVE that
-I love how you showed the impact of her just being released from juvenile detention on her daily life and on her relationship with her family! I also loved how you described her encounter with the man as they pass by their car! My jaw legit dropped. Your writing is sooooo good.
CONS:
-Honestly, I couldn't really find any. The story is written so beautifully, and I couldn't find any plot holes or any inconsistencies in your story.
-There are just like 2 grammatical errors I could find in your story, but they don't take away from the story at all and are minimal.
SUMMARY:
-Overall, I absolutely LOVE your story. The way you write is absolutely amazing, and the plot... omg. It's so unique! This book definitely deserves more attention. Thanks for letting me read this!
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