Reviewer- SardonyxSwann
PROS:
-Very aesthetically pleasing :)
-I liked how you introduced the caste system in Rosenfield before beginning the book; it's really easy to understand!
-It's a unique concept for the story! I haven't really seen stories like this before!
-The story is interesting throughout! I understood everything and enjoyed it :)
CONS: -Different tenses... like saying "was" and "is"
-There's lots of grammar issues, making it hard to understand.
SUMMARY:
Overall, I think your story is good so far! The plot is interesting and everything gives off this nice preppy british aesthetic :)But I'd fix the grammar errors. There's lots of them, and normally this wouldn't be a problem, but since there's a lot you're going to want to go back and fix those.
Other than that I think you're good!
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