Reviewer- _bluebutterfly07
pros:
1. a very fine plot. a precise plot is what captures readers' attention pretty much, and i think you've done a good job on that part.
2. presley and deon, the protagonists are described so well, and also the places are, too.
3. the message you want to convey to the readers are pretty crisp without any fillers and potholes.
4. the flashback of pres is heartbreakingly beautiful, i truly loved that one.
cons:
1. your story seems too quick.
2. try to take it a lil slowly. like, for example, pres and deon fall for each other in the first sight and confess in the tenth chap, which doesn't spice up.
3. avoid too much mature scenes. i truly felt lil uncomfortable while reading the latest chapters.
above all that, i think i truly enjoyed your book so much :)
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