Part 3

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Hello Beautiful People..!!

There's someone who have messaged me that my STORIES are NOT GOOD ENOUGH to be published in Wattpad. She has clearly mentioned that these STORIES are just CRAP and not at all up to Okay-ish Standard..!! I know I have mentioned this in my other story, 'ManVeer FF - Someone Special'. 

I felt really bad that, I have BLOCKED her and DELETED her messages which  I have never ever done before (*for this reason, in particular*). Never received that much NEGATIVITY in my life.

I have a QUESTION to all READERS, i.e., 'Are you really liking the story-line?' I want HONEST REVIEWS. If it's really that BAD, I will STOP updating this story. 

As the RESPONSE of both the STORIES is really LOW, I was persuading myself that maybe, I should stop writing. I really didn't have the heart to update any of my stories. But I am just updating just for those very few loyal readers, who like my stories. 

Anyways, enjoy the update..!!

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Niharika: Bahut cute hai Manyata. (Brij-Giri nod in agreement.)

Komal: Itne saalon baad hum apni bacchi ki awaaz sun rahe hai. (getting bit emotional)

Brijraj: Bilkul nahi badli hai woh, bachpan mein bhi aise hi har kisi pe hukum karti thi. (Anil agrees.)

Sunita: Jab se woh humare saath hai, bilkul apni ungli pe baand kar rakh chuki hai. Warna toh Mayank ke baad hum dono ne jeene ki ummeed hi chod di thi. (wiping her tears)

(Later everyone have their dinner while Shergill's stay back in Mumbai with Devgarh Royals.)

*Simultaneously* (In Singhania Mansion, Ahaan, Shreya, Armaan, Shraddha, Manyata are in movie room watching some movie while Manyata, Shraddha and Shreya look at Armaan, who is crying over an emotional scene. Manyata rolls her eyes while Shreya is busy admiring her anxious-faced husband and emotional brother-in-law, Shraddha looks at Armaan with eyes, full of love and admiration.)

Manyata: Oh god!! Armaan stop crying on my shoulders. Tum humare dress pe ro rahe ho. Its really irritating.

Shreya: (makes a scary noise from her phone and winks at girls.)

Armaan: Mummy-Daddy!! Bhoot-Bhoot..!! (yelling loudly while girls laugh out loud and Ahaan is looking around for source of the voice.)

Ahaan: Baby, this is not funny ya!!

Shraddha: It was funny, Jiju. (still laughing)

Armaan: (whining) Bhabhi!! That's not fair ya..!!

(They have good time teasing Armaan while Shraddha, Ahaan and Shreya take glances of their respective partners.)

In Uday's Room (He stares at their childhood pictures. He looks at her pictures with full of love and admiration. Unknowingly, he remembers the last moments, he spent with her.)

*Flashback* (Uday is 12 years old same as Vj, Manyata is 10 years old while Unnati is 9 years old and Jay is 8 years old. They are playing in Devgarh Palace, Rajasthan.) 

Manyata, Unnati and Jay Outfits.. 

 

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