✷﹒𝐖𝐈𝐓𝐂𝐇 𝐌𝐀𝐋𝐄𝐅𝐈𝐂𝐄𝐍𝐓﹗

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➜﹕🧚  When you opened your eyes you saw a completely different scenario than the previous one. It was dark with purple and green lanterns floating around. There were creepers and climbers plants spread around the walls decorating them with greenery. A black cat was sleeping peacefully while purring. Crows were looking straight into your eyes which made a shiver run down your body. ⭔

(ꜜ⨳) When your eyes finally averted from the decor of the room they fell on a tall woman in a Black silk gown and a big cloak wrapped around hers. Her horns were sharp and that fascinates you as well as scares you a bit. She had her hair dropping down till her back was all-black and straight which made her look attractive. Her red lips had a smirk on them and her eyes shone like gold. Looking into her eyes was like getting hypnotised by them. You just keep wanting to look into it at the same time it makes your heart beat faster than normal. 🎐

⿴﹕She chuckled with her deep voice ringing around the room. The thick heavy silence broke with her chuckle and she started taking slow steps towards making your heart race even faster if possible. She smiled that wreaked havoc inside herself. By the mischievous glint in her eyes, it was quite sure that she knew what she was doing and what effect she was having on you. ᶻz

✩」“Oh my," she said shocked, "look who we have here, a scared little human. Oh honey you don't need to be scared." 🔮

罒﹐ ♡ She chuckled again looking at your surprised expression that seemed amusing to her. She took even closer steps towards you and stopped right behind you leaning down to your level and whispering not so sweetly in your ear. 

★﹕"Welcome to my Scenario, human. I am as you already know Maleficent and now I'll be describing myself here."

She retreated herself away from you standing straight and walking in front of you. With every step, you could see the heavy cloak brushing against the floor. You gulped in nervousness as she snapped her fingers dimming the lights. ⌗﹐ ᶻ

✹﹐"Now it's perfect. I don't like bright things dear. I'm sorry if this scares you. I hope it's alright with you."

She looks at you studying your expression or asking for your consent you don't know because every time she looks at you it's a mess. There are so many things in her eyes that you can't decipher them. You smiled and nodded, receiving a nod back from her. ⚗️

╭╯"Now starting about myself. I am Maleficent and I am known for my awful honesty. I am someone who analyzes things bit by bit and reviews them. I'm someone who easily scares people with my honesty. I hope in future you won't be intimidated by it because by all means I'm here to help you improve yourself and for that, I'd need to be awfully honest isn't it? So I hope you will keep that in your mind. Before going further, I want you to follow me permanently, don't you dare unfollow me once the review is done or else I'll haunt you to death, also read my book 'forgive me' which has less than 2000 words and leave an honest comment. The genres I prefer are  Fantasy, Romance ( dark romance is a big yes from my side), paranormal, mystery, horror. I don't review fanfiction.

Now here is the paper this is my reviewing criteria. Read it carefully and move on to the next scenarios." 🎐

⩇⩇﹑𝐦𝐚𝐥𝐞𝐟𝐢𝐜𝐞𝐧𝐭'𝐬 𝐫𝐞𝐯𝐢𝐞𝐰𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐜𝐫𝐢𝐭𝐞𝐫𝐢𝐚﹑🔮

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Title- 5

Blurb- 5  ?!

▹ The first chapter- 5

Pacing of the story- 10  ?!

Plot- 20

▹ Writing style- 20  ?!

▹ Grammar and vocab- 10

▹ Character development- 10  ?!

▹ Readers' enjoyment- 10

⊂⊃ "Good luck with the next scenario you scary little human."

➜﹒𝐍𝐈𝐆𝐇𝐓𝐒𝐇𝐀𝐃𝐄 ― 𝒓𝒆𝒗𝒊𝒆𝒘 𝒔𝒉𝒐𝒑 ✦﹐╮Where stories live. Discover now