The Mass effect Experience

Extra before we jump into mass effect 2!

Before we jump into mass effect 2 I'd like to say and ask a few things.

First: My writing style will change and be more like how I did the Lemon to add more build.

Second: Since I didn't use John much he won't be like Jane I've got an idea of what to do with him

Third: I'll be updating every 5 days instead of my 2 day updates, unless it has enough views.

Finally: I'll be making a poll every once in a while. Example: we get to the suicide mission "Who goes into the vent? Who leads the second team?"

Now unto the questions I got:

1: What do you think I could do to improve my book?

2: Do we stay together with Jane or do you want to romance someone else? (It'll be between Jane Miranda jack and Kasumi. I'll leave Tali to romance with garrus )

3: Any ideas I could add down the line? Your thoughts are very much welcomed

4: Do you want me to follow like I did in mass effect 1 by copying the story dialogue or writing it completely from scratch?

5:Who would you want to accompany us through the missions? I usually had wrex with us in mass effect 1 so I want you guys to pick we'd be with us. It'll be a 4 man squad instead of 3. Jane, Y/n and Vallah ( an oc female turian who's going to be like a sister to us )

Lastly: Since I won't be rapid firing mass effect 2 updates, Is there another story you'd be interested in me making? You can add any video game or anime you'd want. As long as you add something with me to go off of like "I want a fairy tail story [Harem]" and that's what I'll work on here and there. If there's nothing, I've got 2 in mind.

Now I want to do a quick fun facts about the story

1: I was actually debating between Romancing Tali or fem shep at the beginning but you guys chose for me.

2: I was actually debating on adding Vallah in mass effect 1 and another OC Call Rirdan who'd be Fem Krogan. Thought it'd be funny to have Y/n dating a krogan.

3: Kaiden was supposed to die. I didn't want him to die but when I made that first pill before virmire I was having a crisis on what to do. Opening the second poll was also because it got tied 3 to 3 on who lives and dies

4: The lemon was not by best work and I don't even know how well it was. It was my first one

5: I didn't even know the actual age of the Normandy crew. Apparently Jane Is 28 and Kaiden is 34. Making Y/n 36. I thought they were younger. Like Jane at somewhere between 23 and 26. Same with Kaiden but nope.

6: In the lemon I wrote about Jane losing for V-Card to Y/n. I just thought the idea of "They both only wanted each other so they never went for another"

7: This whole thing was truly just for fun. Wanting to shoot my shot and see how fun writing was. I had more fun write what was going on than the dialogue. Plus my running joke on the hate of elevators was funny to me. It was just about how it felt like you went through more elevators than geth troops so I added that in

Finally: The only reason I didn't use photos in the begin chapter is Because I get good pick. My dumbass didn't know I could save those pick instead of just taking a screenshot. I'm not good with any type of technology. Hope I'm forgiven for that. Still no idea how to post gifs though.

That's all for now and I'll see all soon in the second entry of the mass effect trilogy. Oh and please do tell me any TAGS I missed when making this story. I'll correct it very very shortly