Title: The Sorcerer
Author: saphlua
Genre: Fantasy
Status: Ongoing
Summary: Archie Reese discovers he is a mage and goes on a quest through time and space to defeat Damien Grey, a dangerous alchemist.
First impression 9/10 - Your cover is nice but not super eye catching and intriguing, if that makes sense. Your summary really makes me want to read more
Plot 8/10 - My only thing here is that I thought your plot may be moving too fast, but that's just a matter of opinion. It's still a super interesting plot.
Dialogue 9/10 - Your dialogue is very well written and you do a good job of showing people's personalities, like when Roan was telling Archer about being Archer the archer. The only thing I don't like is the repetition of 'said'. I jut feel like you use it too often, changing it up adds more description to your chapter and makes it more interesting.
Grammar 10/10 - I haven't seen any glaring grammatical errors and I applaud you for that. I hate books with grammar issues and your lack of errors makes me enjoy your book even more!
Characters 9/10 - Your characters are interesting and are very different from each other. I love them all and I can't wait to read more about them. (Roan is probably my favorite though)
Overall 9/10 - I love this story so much! I love all of the stuff about the otherscape and you really have a different take on the whole mage/wizard thing. It's definitely different than anything I've read before and I can't wait to read more!
If you're into fantasy and mage stories check this book out, it's amazing!
I would like to apologize if this review isn't very good, it's my first one :/.
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