Review 10 - Memories

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Title: Memories
Author: PurpleCielo1117
Genre: General Fiction
Status: Ongoing
Mature: No
Summary:

In which Johnathan is given a second chance to love and to lose her again.

** I only read through chapter three **

First impression 9/10 -

Cover: Your cover is absolutely beautiful! The colors are soft and it looks professional. The only thing I don't like is how similar the colors are between the background and title. Also, I'm assuming the flowers have some sort of meaning in the book, though I could be wrong.

Summary: Your summary is quite short and I don't really like it. It doesn't make me want to read the story. I would add a little more detail. Congrats on all the awards though!

Plot 10/10 - Your plot is very original and I'm in love with it. I definitely didn't cry. Nope, not at all. I can't wait to read more of this and get even deeper into this plot. The whole aspect of her having dementia is heart wrenching, but your writing is amazing.

Dialogue 9.5/10 - There were a few instances where you put a period instead of a comma, but it was almost always perfect.

Grammar 9.5/10 - The same goes for your grammar. The only thing was the periods instead of commas in dialogue, but spelling and other grammar was perfect.

Characters 10/10 - The way you show their grief is amazing. I was hurting for them, I could relate to them. I love all of them so much and I'm hurting for them.

Overall 9.6/10 - This book is so original and unique (those may be synonyms oops) and I love how it gives an insight into living with someone who has dementia. It definitely tugged at my heartstrings.

I highly recommend this book! It's so amazing and I think everyone needs to read it.

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