Title: The Phantom Whisperer
Author: MrSanguine
Genre: Fantasy
Status: Ongoing
Mature: No
Summary:
An organ harvester teams with a sinister ghost to solve a grisly murder in the violent streets of Onyx City.
First impression 7.5/10 -
Cover: I love your cover. It looks very professional and is eye catching. There isn't much else for me to say here, so I'm moving on.
Summary: I see that you've changed your summary since the last time I looked, and I personally liked the old one better. Your current one is kind of vague in my opinion. The second sentence is also very confusing to read.
Plot 10/10 - I haven't read anything like this, and honestly it's not my cup of tea. I probably won't be reading further, but your description is amazing. They way you describe things paints a very vivid picture in my mind.
Dialogue 10/10 - I didn't see any dialogue errors, thank you for that. You do a great job of expressing emotions/feelings through your dialogue as well.
Grammar 9/10 - You have a great sense of grammar, but there were a few instances were some sentences didn't make sense.
Characters 10/10 - In what I've read, I've only been introduced to Darius, but he's very well developed. All of your side characters also have very good development. I applaud you.
Overall 9.3/10 - Overall, this book is amazing. While it's not what I would normally read, your descriptions made it very interesting for me. The only thing I would have you look over is your summary (fix the second sentence) and read over your chapters for confusing sentences. I highly recommend this book.
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