Title: Letters from the other side
Author: Epicadrenaline
Genre: Poetry/Romance
Status: Ongoing
Mature: No
Summary:
Sergeant Bryce Waters: A soldier assigned in the outskirts of Afghanistan.
Nurse Terra Legado Waters: A nurse that works with wounded soldiers as a way to get closer to her army husband.
After a fatal accident threathned to separate them they try to re -connect with each other by trying to relive their love story. Together with the help of love-letters they embark on a trail down memory lane to relive all the good and bad moments they shared and find out what exactly made them fall in love.
First impression 9/10 -
Cover: Your cover is super cute. The font is big and easy to read and all of the images around it fit the title. I like how they frame the words.
Summary: I like your summary, but it contains lots of repeating words. You say 'relive' a lot, so maybe you could find a way to change it? Just a suggestion.
Plot 10/10 - I really like the plot. It's unique and enjoyable to read. This is more poetry so I don't really know how to score all of these, but I'll try my best.
Dialogue /10 - n/a
Grammar 9.5/10 - I didn't see any spelling errors or other grammatical errors, but you end all of your phrases with commas and I get that it's poetry, but it just seems weird to me.
Characters 10/10 - I don't really know a lot about either of them, but I love the backstory in the letters.
Overall 9.6/10 - I'm sorry I didn't have much to say, I don't really know how to review poetry. This is definitely a good read though!
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