Title: Team Spirit
Author: KeriHalfacre
Genre: Teen Fiction
Status: Ongoing
Mature: Yes/No - language and making out
Summary:
Summer's over and Sam faces a dilemma: how to manage a long distance relationship with his first real boyfriend. Joining the volleyball team seems like the perfect answer to get out of town to see Leo.
Laura's perfect season is rudely interrupted by Wren, new girl and lesbian hellbent on distracting her from her goals. The best way to avoid Wren seems to be pretending to be Sam's girlfriend, for his benefit and for hers.
How long can the lies hold up?
First impression 10/10 -
Cover: I love your cover. It's simple and adorable. I like the fonts you have on it and the picture is perfect. I don't have anything bad to say about it.
Summary: I love your summary as well. It's well written and gives enough information, but not too much. I like the general idea of the story, too.
Plot 10/10 - I love this story so much! It's so interesting and I love that it's LGBT. I'm definitely going to be reading more!
Dialogue 10/10 - You're dialogue is absolutely perfect. I didn't find any errors and I thank you for that.
Grammar 9/10 - There were only a few spots, mainly in your prologue, that some words were wrong (you have on sure instead of unsure), but other than that, it was perfect.
Characters 10/10 - I love love love Sam and Lars! They're so well developed and I love their personalities. I don't have any criticism for them at all.
Overall 9.8/10 - This is amazingly written and is one of the best books I've seen on Wattpad! The little grammar errors are easy to ignore when the rest of the story is so good. I highly recommend this book to anyone reading this!
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