In Deep (rewriting?? )

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Our class was dismissed and Jessica and I made our way to Lana's car. She was an only child with rich parents so her car was pretty amazing. She had a red jeep that all the doors came off of. Although living in a suburb, we usually only left the top down. We hopped in, me and Jessica doing rock paper scissors for the shotgun. I won and hopped into the passenger side and Jessica begrudgingly got into the back.

Lana rolled out of the school away from the kids screaming and celebrating the last Friday before most of them will start the exam crunch. We got on the highway making our way to the bigger mall in the city, hair flying behind us, shades on, enjoying the music on the radio. Jessica was in the back snap chatting the even while I just enjoyed the sun, relaxing. We finally got to the mall, and because we got out of school so early we where able to get a fairly good parking space. We wander into the mall Lana grabbing my hand and dragging me into a certain direction.

"First we go to Bikini Village," she states. After some tedious amount of shopping, 4 hours to be exact, we finally decide we have spent enough and need food. I dump the 100 bags I was carrying under our table once we where seated at the table by the hostess.

"Well, I think that was a successful shopping trip," Jessica states, Lana just nod leaning back onto the booth. We had gone to many stores, the girls picking out sundresses, bathing suits, shirts, shorts, jeans, bodysuits, shoes, and so much more. The girls decided that after our last exam day they would come over and help me put everything I needed in a suitcase. We ate and gossiped, at around 8 we decided that it was best if we start heading home. Shopping in toe I enter my house, flicking on the hall light as I go.

"Hi Sara," I hear my mom say from the other room. "How was shopping?" she asked.

"It was good. I got a lot of things," I reply, slipping off my shoes and making my way to the room she was located in. "I may have blown all my birthday money, but that's ok."

"Get some cute things?" she asked trying to peer into one of the bags in my hand.

"Ya, I'm just going to put these in my room and read a little," I say pulling the bag away from her curious eyes and heading for the stairs.

"Ok, don't stay up too late," she yelled as I climbed the stairs to the second floor. I dumped the bags onto the ground and went to take off my clothes and makeup. Slipping into my pajamas I grab the book I'm reading and head to bed. I read until my first yawn escaped my mouth. I put the book on my bedside table and turned off my lamp, snuggling into my blankets and bracing for sleep.

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