In Deep (rewriting?? )

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I wake up to my dad knocking on my door. "Wake up Sarah, today we are having a beach cookout with everyone." I was so excited. We where to eat on the beach and swim all day. I put on my black one piece bathing suit that had an open back.

I decided to straighten my hair, planning just not going to get it wet. I straightened it so that I would have one thing less to do for dinner. I put on shorts and a tank top over the suit, gather the bag I brought to the beach yesterday and made my way to meet my dad.

He was standing in the living room with a backpack slung over his shoulder. He was wearing his swim trunks and a Hawaiian shirt.

"Ready to do?" he asked, swiping up the room key that was on the coffee table.

"Ya," I reply, tying my hair into a messy bun, making my way out the door. We take a golf cart to the private beach that the company had rented. There was a barbecue that a chef was manning it.

A line of tables that had all lunch items on them were set up beside the large barbecue. A few more tables were scattered around and a few lounge chairs. I eye the food, grabbing a few things before claiming a lounge chair.

I put my towel down, taking off my clothes so I was in my bathing suit, and stretched out on the chair. My father came and claimed the chair beside me. He had a plate of kabobs, happily munching on the freshly made food.

Once he was finished he ask me, "want to go for a swim with you dear old dad?"

I quickly got up yelling "race you" sprinting toward the ocean. We splashed around for a while till my father got tired, complaining about his old age he made his way back to his longer. I sifted through the water, enjoying the wet sand beneath my feet. I found an area of coral and became entranced by it, watching the small fish.

"Boo!" someone yelled behind me. I screamed and fell into the water. I submerged and found a hallowing Jason. Soaking strands of hair falling out of the bun and into my face.

I look towards him, radiating anger, "What the hell Jason?" I spat.

"what?" he inquired innocently, though quickly dropping the act telling me, "you should have seen your face." bursting into another fit of laughter.

"You are such an asshole," I say pushing him. "I will get you back, just you wait," I tell him with an evil smirk. I didn't know what I would do yet, but when I do something, it's going to be big.

I storm away, going to my chair to try to dry my hair. I had just straightened it. Though my attempt to keep it straight did nothing as I looked at it, already starting to see my brown hair reverting to its natural curl. I sigh in frustration.

"Look I'm sorry," Jason says behind me

"Look what you did to my hair," I say pointing to the frizzy curls forming.

"What wrong with it?" he asks confused. I motion to all the curls though his facial expression doesn't change from confused. "You hair always looks beautiful, I like it this way," he says and I was shocked.

His mother called him over and he walked off. I sighed and sat down, though quickly became bored since I had nothing to do. Well, I had things to do, I could tan, or read, or swim though that was appealing.

I suddenly see Jason out of the corner of my eye and he looked like he was trying to get my attention. I walk over to him, "What do you want?" I asked stopping in front of him. He grabs my hand leading me to a forested area. He drags me through trees and plants, trying not to trip had proven extremely difficult, especially since I had no shoes.

He finally stopped in front of a wall of leaves. He looked me deep in the eye and asked, "Will you go on an adventure with me?" I look around, confuse. Weren't I already on an adventure with him, going into the unknown forested area was not a normal thing for me, and I told him just that.

"Well would you like to see something cool?" he asked, I shrugged nodding my head and he pushed away the leaves.

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