(A.N.) Hello there! This here fanfiction is my very first story. This is dedicated to my friends and I_LOVE_TOBIAS_EATON. This is my Allegiant With A Twist... In this fanfiction, the most horrible thing that actually happened in the original Allegiant is actually just a 'myth' in this fanfiction. And Tori is alive. (Disclaimer) I DO NOT OWN THE CHARECTERS- Well Initiates I guess?- VERONICA ROTH DOES. I ALSO DO NOT OWN THE DIVERGENT SERIES... VERONICA ROTH DOES. Anyways, enjoy, comment and vote. P.s. Sorry if there are gaps between the lines, my phone is bugging put for some reason and keeps "returning." 😄👍💖 Tori is still alive. Everyone doesn't know that George/Georgie is alive. Tori is alive, Eric, Jeanine, and David are dead.
~FanGirl562
The war has ended, Jeanine, Marcus, Max, and Eric have been killed in the attack by the Dauntless for revenge of the factions for killing the Divergent. It has been about a day since Tris's death. Everyone has been sad and depressed for the past day. Ever since Tris died, Christina has been sad and lying in bed all day. Uriah died as well, only a few days after Tris was shot by David, who was soon put in court and then killed. "I should have told her not to do it!" Says Caleb. "Caleb, it's done. She's gone, she did it so she could save you." Explains Christina sniffling. "I was the one who should have been there!" I yell, staring at my feet. Everyone waits in silence. I shouldn't have said that, now that I am remembering all the things Tris did. "Tobias... -Excuse me, 'Four'-Beatrice did it so that everyone was safe. She said she never wanted to leave you." Explains Caleb. I look at my hands, only to see dried blood, and to smell the scent of metal. "You are the one, who should have stopped her!" I yell, looking into Caleb's eyes "You should have stopped her from David killing her! You are the one who should have died! Not Tris!"I yell at Caleb who is now staring at the ground, and replies "Her name is Beatrice, not Tris." He lets a single tear flow down his cheek, but more soon come to follow. Caleb looks up at me and says "It wasn't my fault... I would have stopped her if I could! She was holding me at gunpoint Tobias!" He is looking at me now, with wide eyes, tears rolling down his face. "My name is Four!" I yell "And her name is Tris now. She changed her name to Tris when she joined Dauntless, when she was first jumper... Now if I may... I'm going to go for a walk." I say as I walk toward the door, not looking at everyone sobbing and crying, tears rolling down their cheeks.
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Even though it has been one day after Tris's death, I still see her dead body on the table whenever I close my eyes. I start running after the train to Dauntless. Once I am at the train, I see someone familiar, Zeke. He waves his hand as I get in the train car he's in. I don't even bother to greet him. I am still scarred by the images of Tris's dead body, laying on the table, deformed, bloody, cold, lifeless."Four, I know she is gone. But dude, she liked you, a lot. All she could talk about when Uriah and I met her was 'Four.' Four she was talking about you because she loved you." He says. "Well, she was stupid to go and not let her brother die." I say. Wait, she wasn't being stupid, she was being selfless and brave. I think of the memories I have had of Tris. Her blond hair, her smile, her laugh, all of that is gone. I have nothing of her left. Her brother -Caleb- is the only thing from her family left. "Four, you know she liked you. How she kept looking at you ever since she was first jumper. She wore a sweater, which I knew was yours, the day after she got beat up by Peter and the other initiates, like Al. I knew you saved her from her from being killed by Al, Peter, Drew and the others." I am surprised of how he knows I saved her, all I think about know is how he knows."How do you know I saved her from the other initiates?" I ask. "She told Christina, Will, and Uriah -who soon told me." He replies. I nod and say goodbye, he does the same.
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Once I leave the train, I go to the Dauntless compound. As I walk towards the chasm, I look down at the river, and the rocks below. Images of Tris flood my mind. I see myself showing my tattoo on my back, revealing my bare skin, covered with ink from my waist up to my neck. I shake my head removing my thoughts, but nothing goes away. I just walk towards my apartment, which is old and dusty. I smile when I remember Tris, yet I am still depressed of what happened, of how she died. Of how she gave her life for her brother, who wanted to die. As soon as I sit onto the bed I drift off to a deep sleep with the thought of her.
(A.N.) So, what did you think? Good? Bad? Meh? Horrible? Leave a comment saying if I should continue this or not. Thanks.
~ FanGirl562
