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by hyuniebees

Book Title: Fix You

Author: serendi-pity

Rate: 10/10

What I Thought About The Book: Okay, I don't just like your book because it's a fanfiction about Aleks. Very truthfully, your writing is incredibly beautiful. I love the whole backstory feature to it, and how it tells about parts of her life that brought her to the time she's in now. Not only that, but your description on her feelings and emotions, all portraying to her life- it's so fucking amazing, oh my god. Vocabulary is on point, dramatic points, storylines, plot, everything is just so perfect. Even though you've only got three chapters out, they are magnificent. I honestly can't wait to see more from you.

Cover Wise: I do like the cover, but change is sometimes good? I don't know, it's just missing something, and I can't quite put my finger on it.

Critism: There really isn't much that you can do that can make this any better. Your vocabulary is beautiful, grammatical errors are rarely ever seen, and you've got a lovely talent to write with. However, there are times when some scenes seem a bit rushed, but it does happen, and I know where you're coming from. Other than that, it's got a wonderful ring to it, and I cannot wait for more chapters.