Correction list- Chpt 1

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MI Correction Count

LAAN: A list like this will be after every MI Immortal chapter I edit. Which will be all of them. All 44 of them. Enjoy :)

Chapter 1

- Translation

- Comma add

- Dark'ness

- (that's how I got my name) delete

- Too many and's

- Trans

- Comma add

- Censor

- Paragraph

- Comma add

- (I'm seventeen)

- I'm a goth (in case you couldn't tell)

- For example today

- and a black miniskirt

- It was ....

- Trans

Total: 13

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