Correction list- Chpt 22

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Chapter 22

- Trans

- Misery

- blak lacey

- comma add

- where………………….

- B;loody

- Diabolo,

- comma add

- wart

- wit

- was

- paragraph add

- too many ands

- paragraph add

- blak

- too many ands

- likee

- Censor

- Paragrpah add

- B’loody

- comma add (x3)

- she had

- clearage

- with

- Censor

- too many adds

- comma add

- paragraph add

- Jenny {Change to ‘Ginny’}

- So were Crab and Goyle {move and change Crab}

- {Change ‘She’}

- Paragraph add

- too many ands

- Comma add (x2)

- thing {delete}

- Diabolo

- and stuff

- goffik

- Stanism

- OMFG

- yielded

- Censor

- u

- Enoby

- Censor

- OK

- Censor

- Your

- Censor

- your

- all erective

- comma add

- too many ands

- Hal

- widow

- Censor

- Griffindoor

- mini

- Dumbledork

- Cornelia Fudged

- Doris Rumbridge

- {Get rid of all CAPS}

- BARK

- Cornelia Fudge.

- yelled Rumbridge

- Butt

- ……………………….

- Enony Dark’ness

- Crab

- B’loody

- ……………

Total: 75

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