My Immortal (Abducted by Grammar Nazis)

Chapter 20

Chapter 20

AN: I sed I dnoty ker wut u fink! stof pflamin ok prepz!1 fangz 2 raven 4 da help!1 oh yah btw ill be un vacation in transilvania 4 da nex 3 dayz so dnot expect updatz.

{Trans: I said I don't care what you think! (Obviously you do.) Stop flaming okay preps! Thanks to Raven for the help! Oh yeah, by the way I'll be on vacation in Transylvania for the next 3 days so don't expect updates (Stay on vacation please!)}

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All day I wondered what the surprise was. Meanwhile, I put on a black leather mini dress, a black corset with purple lace stuff all over it, and black gothic combat boots. MCR were going to do the concert again, since Voldemort had taken over the last one. I slit my wrists while I moshed to MCR in my bedroom all night, feeling excited. Suddenly someone knocked on the door while I was trying on some black clothes and moshing to 'Thank you for the Venom'. I got mad and turned it off, but secretly I hoped inside that it was Draco so we could do it again.

"What the f***ing hell are you doing!" I shouted angrily. It was Lupin! "Are you going to come rape me or what?" I yelled. I was allowed to say that because Dumbledore had told us all to be careful around him and Snape since he was a pedophile.

"No, actually can I please burrow some condemns." he growled angrily.

"Yeah, so you can f*** your six-year-old girlfriend, huh?" I shouted sarcastically.

"F***er." He said, going away.

Well anyway, I put on some black eye shadow, black eyeliner, and some black lipstick and white foundation. Then I went. Then I gasped.

Snape and Lupin were in the middle of the empty hall, doing it, and Dobby was watching! {It's like they're writing this and like 'OMFG DATZ LIK SO GOFFIK GURL!!"}

"Oh my god you ludicrous idiot!" they both shouted angrily when they saw me. Dobby ran away crying. They got up, though. Normally I would have been turned on (I luv cing guyz do it) {Trans: I love seeing guys do it (I highly doubt that but the internet can cause curiosity spikes)} but both of them were f***ing preps. (btw snake is movd 2 griffindoor now) {Trans: By the way Snape has moved to Griffindor now.}

"What the f***?! Is that why you wanted condemns?" I asked sadistically. (c I speld dat) {Trans: See I spelled that (Good for you).}

"Only you wouldn't give them to me!" Lupin shouted angrily.

"Well you should have told me." I replied.

"You dimwit!" Snape began to shout angrily. And then I took out my black camera and took a picture of them. You could see that they were naked.

"Well excuse me!" they both shouted angrily. "What was that all about?"

"It was to blackmail you." I snarled. "So now next time you see me doing it with my boyfriend you can't f***ing rat me out or I'll show this to Dumbledore. So f*** off, you bastards!" I started to run. They chased me but I threw my wand at them and they tripped over it. Well anyway, I went outside and there was Vampire, looking extremely fucking hot.

"What the f***? Where's Draco?" I asked him.

"Oh he's being a f***ing bastard. He told me he wouldn't come." Vampire said shaking his head. "You want to come with me to the concert?"

Then he showed me his flying car. I gasped. It was a black car. He said his godfather Sirus Black had given it to him. The license plate on the front said 'MCR666' on it. The one on the back said 'EBONY' on it.

I gasped. {Does she have asthma or something? She gasped like four times this chapter.}

We flew to the concert hall. MCR were there, playing.

Vampire and I began to make out, moshing to the music. I gasped, looking at the band. {5 times.}

I almost had an orgasm. Gerard was so f***ing hot! He begin to sing 'Helena' and his sexy, beautiful voice began to fill the hall. And then, I heard some crying. I turned and saw Draco, crying in a corner.